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I watched the ash dance precariously
on the tip of my cigarette
as I fought to get rid of it.

I take pride of the diseases
running through my body,
as I know it's not what I'll die of

A whisper and a prayer
sung into the night
as I sit in insomniac trappings

There is no desire here
as I sit in silence
struggling with this new technology

The pressure in my head
reminds me of what's happening in my body
as it throbs in time with the metronome

As colour dances with the smoke
I realise there really is no end to this
:iconshadowed-angel:

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Part of the 100 Themes Project which I should have finished a long time ago. It's been three years and a day since I started *sigh*

100 Themes

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reminds of a line I heard once, "this is he winter of our discontent" I say that due to the fact, the poem speak of the absolute loss of hope in this life as though you have given up to the pain to the inevitable loss of life that seem to be shortly coming.

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All the scars that never heal
All the wounds that will not seal
I will not forget the day
These memories never fall
Fuel: bring you down
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every one has thier pleasures, pain is my pleasure, as your moans and screams pierce the night
:iconshadowed-angel:
I'm actually pretty proud of the fact that this has made you think of Shakespeare, hehe.
I can see how it can be taken in such a way. One of the brilliant things about writing is the varying interpretations that people can come to.

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I really cannot understand why people choose to ignore the "ART" part of deviantART
It's in fucking capitals!
How can you miss it!?

*The-Shadowed-Angel
~jaded-reflection
~kapari
:iconshad0w-w0lf:
and proud you should be of the piece, it means that the diversity of your skills and your craft.

--
All the scars that never heal
All the wounds that will not seal
I will not forget the day
These memories never fall
Fuel: bring you down
--
every one has thier pleasures, pain is my pleasure, as your moans and screams pierce the night

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